现代社会通讯交流的工具日益发达,但人和人之间的交往并没有随之增加。面对陷入困难的陌生人,有人伸手援助,认为帮助陌生人是一种美德。有人则觉得帮助陌生人会让自自己陷入麻烦和危险。您的看法呢?请您以Should we help strangers?为题,写一篇100-120字的短文来阐述这一现象。
1.描述以上人际交往的现状和信息。 2.简短评论,分析原因。 3.给出您的看法。
注意:短文标题已给出(不计字数)。 Should We Help Strangers?
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【答案】
Helping strangers is always considered as a treasured quality of human beings. We need help from others throughout our life no matter when we travel to other places or stay at home. On the other
hand helping others can make us happy. We feel a great sense of joy when we are trusted and needed. However some people are cautious when it comes to helping strangers. They believe that helping others involves risks of getting cheated or even hurt. Lending a hand to a stranger often puts us in a concerning situation for it requires our trusting someone who we even don’t know. Moreover there are times when we have our own limitations.
Thus I personally believe we should do what is within our ability to help others undoubtedly including strangers.
【解析】
拿到作文题目,首先要认真审题,这是一篇提纲作文,现代社会通讯交流的工具日益发达,但人和人之间的交往并没有随之增加。面对陷入困难的陌生人,有人伸手援助,认为帮助陌生人是一种美德。有人则觉得帮助陌生人会让自自己陷入麻烦和危险。您的看法呢?请您以Should we help strangers?为题,写一篇100-120字的短文来阐述这一现象。所以要用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容以已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,很好的衔接开头与结尾,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题,一定要写出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求词数100-120字左右,不能太多也不能太少。
请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
The Chinese Characters Dictation Competition which requires contestants to hear spoken words and then write the correct characters is shown on CCTV every
weekend.Since July organizers of the competition have been reviving (重新使用) characters that have fallen out of general use such as weirui (葳蕤) and liewen (裂璺). 要求:
1.就此材料发表你的看法; 2.紧扣材料,有明确的观点; 3.词数不少于100。
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【答案】
The revival of rarely used characters promoted by the contest seems ridiculous.Looking at it in terms of practicability the contest is leading the public in the wrong direction. The development of a language cannot be separated from its usage in reality.Throughout the course of history outdated characters or words have inevitably been replaced by more
modern and innovative versions.For one thing many other simpler words can express the same meaning why would people invest time in remembering the strokes(笔划) of such complicated word? For another the research of ancient Chinese characters should be undertaken by academics rather than the general public.
For a TV program using traditional culture to attract audience is a great selling point but we should be aware that the show has little power to bring those rarely used characters back to life.
【解析】
题目要求用英语写对目前汉字听写大赛的评论。写作的要点已经给出,按要求从汉字的使用等方面着手。用第一人称进行写作,评价尽量客观。
范文注意使用for one thing,for another等来衔接段意和句意,做到了语意连贯;范文使用了一些重点语法知识,如:宾语从句that the show has little power to bring those rarely used characters back to life和v-ing形式做宾语remembering the strokes(笔
划) of such complicated word;范文还使用了较多的短语in terms of bring back to life等,使作文显得充实,有内涵。
Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
复旦大学一研究生因平时琐事和同学不和,在寝室饮用水里投毒,导致一室友死亡。作为即将踏入大学校门的你,谈谈和同学和谐相处的重要性以及你的一些建议。 注意:1.词数不少于120个; 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 3.文章开头已给出 不计入字数。
A graduate of Fudan University didn’t get on well with his roommates for trivial.So he put some poison in the drinking water killing one of his
roommates.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A graduate of Fudan University didn’t get on well with his roommate for trivial.He put some poison in the drinking water killing one of his roommates.The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college.There are several ways to create and maintain a
harmonious campus life.The first thing to do is to communicate which brings a better understanding among classmates.
What’s more you’ll have to share with each other.Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates and your relationship will be much closer.Most
important of all you should learn to tolerate and be considerate.Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college.
In conclusion getting along well with your classmates in college is considered greatly important.A harmonious campus life will help us have a good mood and enjoy being together.An unpleasant life will not only make your life influenced but also disturb others’.
现在很多中学生出国留学。据《环球时报》报道,澳大利亚驻华使馆去年签发的留学签证有50%给了高中生。假设你是学生李华,请给某报编辑写一封信,根据以下所给要求,明确表示赞成还是反对中学生出国留学。 赞成观点:
(1)与中国教育相比,国外教育有诸多优点,如……
(2)在国外接受教育,可以培养学生诸多方面的能力,如…… 反对观点:
(1)与中国教育相比,国外教育可能存在诸多问题,如……
(2)过早留学可能给学生在精神上、学习上及经济上造成诸多负面影响,如…… 注:1.除以上内容,你可陈述赞成或反对的其他理由。2.词数100-120个。
【答案】 Dear editor
I think it is good to send teenagers abroad for further study. Compared with China’s education foreign education has many advantages. It has a good education sense pays special attention to the training of students’ abilities and creates relaxing self-study
atmosphere for them. In foreign schools we don’t have to bear a heavy learning load as we do in China and therefore we can learn more and better. In foreign countries we have more chances to learn about foreign culture customs and habits which can broaden our mind. Though we have to look after ourselves abroad and maybe life is hard for us it will help us train our ability to live independently and deal with problems.
Yours sincerely Li Hua
【解析】
题目要求根据所给提示给某报编辑写一封信,表明自己对中学生出国留学的态度--赞成或者反对。赞成的要点包括:国外教育的优点;培养学生的能力;反对的要点包括:国外教育存在诸多问题;在学习、经济等方面给学生带来压力。可以写赞成中学生留学,也可以写反对中学生留学;词数在100-120词之间;注意时态的正确使
用;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文从赞成中学生留学这个角度进行写作,并阐述了出国留学的一些优点。
范文使用了宾语从句it is good to send teenagers abroad;非谓语动词Compared with China’s education;定语从句①as we do in China,②which can broaden our mind;让步状语从句;Though we have to look after ourselves等语法知识,使作文句式多样,也避免了表达单调;
范文使用了一些固定短语pays special attention learn about look after deal with等,使作文内容得到充实。
世界能源价格上涨,使用粮食生产生物燃料。
应对的措施 1. 注重环保,改善生态 2. 严格保护耕地 3. 富国支持穷国,促进世界和谐。
你如何做出自己的贡献1.…… 2.…… 注意:
1. 内容包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译
2. 字数150左右,文章开头已提供,不计入总词数
3. 参考词汇:城市化urbanization 生物燃料biofuels Hello everyone
Now I'll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas.
【答案】
Hello everyone
Now I'll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even
caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world food crisis? First annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. Besides faced with the rising energy prices people have turned to the production of biofuels which has worsened the severe situation.
Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand strict measures
should be taken to protect farmland. Of course to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage. As for me I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment I think we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.
【解析】
这是一篇提纲式的议论文写作素材,探讨国计民生的社会热点话题:粮食价格上涨。写作时要注意避免逐句翻译,并适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中,考试作弊、抄袭作业 、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述,并以How to guarantee honesty为题,从三个方面,谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。 注意:
1.词数:120左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 How to guarantee honesty
As we all know honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret however …
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Honesty is the best policy which is what we should keep in mind all the time.
【答案】
As we all know honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret however it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams copy others’ homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefore how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.
Personally I think honesty education is necessary. For instance courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides related rules and regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework tests relationship with
teachers and parents. Then strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat and consequently they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time.
Honesty is the best policy which is what we should keep in mind all the time.
【解析】
本文是一篇开放式的作文,只提出了一个话题“How to guarantee honesty”话题非常切合学生实际生活,让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间,有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、三人称为主;时态为一般现在时;本文可用三段成文形式成文。内容要点: 1. 学生中存在的作弊现象;2. 解决这一现象的方法;3. 总结要点。
近来,越来越多的学生申请出国留学,掀起了出国热。请你谈谈出国留学的利与弊。
【答案】
Nowadays more and more young people are going to study abroad. In fact like everything else studying abroad has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.
Firstly by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not only useful knowledge but also the culture and customs of other nations. Secondly they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a good command of the foreign language they are learning very quickly.
Moreover they can meet different people and experience different cultures which may help to broaden their horizons.
Just as a popular saying goes “Every coin has two sides” going to study abroad is no exception. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with the costs are much higher than those in their native country. Most overseas students have to work for a living which can’t allow them to pay all their attention to study. To make matters worse they may feel very lonely.
All things considered we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. Therefore I am in favor of going abroad to study.
【解析】
文体:议论文--说明利弊 步骤:1.引出话题 2.利(原因) 3.弊(原因) 4.结论时态:一般现在时
某中学生英文报对是否该取消“五一”长假及理由,在中学生中进行了问卷调查。调查结果如下:
赞成取消(24%) 游客集中,交通拥挤。 景点污染,文物受损。
不赞成取消(76%)
春暖花开季节,适合出游、踏青, 放飞心情。
促进旅游经济、商品销售业的发展。
请你以该报英语编辑的身份,根据上表调查结果,以May Day Long Holidays
Kept or Cancelled? 为题,为报纸写一篇110左右的简短英语报道。开头已为你写好,不记入总词数。
May Day Long Holidays Kept or Cancelled ?
Recently we carried out a survey on whether the May Day holidays should be cancelled or not by means of questionnaire. The results are as follows:
【答案】
May Day Long Holidays Kept or Cancelled ?
Recently we carried out a survey on whether the May Day long holidays should be cancelled or not by means of questionnaire. The results are as follows:
About 24% of the surveyed people are in favor of the canceling the holiday. They state the May Day long holidays contribute to many problems. For a start many tourists choose to travel during the long holidays; as a consequence the traffic is very crowded which brings a lot of inconvenience to the people who need to make regular trips. What’s more with the tourists flowing in the scenic spots are damaged and some cultural relics are ruined. So it goes without saying the May Day long holidays should be cancelled.
However another 76% differ in their opinions on this issue. They hold the view that the May
Day long holidays shouldn’t be cancelled for the following reasons. For one thing May is a good time for outing and to experiencing spring. For another (thing) the tourism
economy is promoted especially sales of commodity in the tourism destinations. There is no doubt that the holiday should be kept.
Anyway every coin has two sides. We should balance the pros and cons before making any decision.
【解析】
文体:议论文--(对比观点):赞成和反对 步骤:1.引出话题(已给) 2. 赞成(数据、原因 ) 3.不赞成(数据、原因) 4. 结论
时态:一般现在时
暑假即将来临,你班同学就假期计划进行讨论,提出了不同看法,请根据提示写一篇英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。
优点 缺点
呆在家中 外出旅游
花费少、舒适方便 增长知识、开阔眼界
不能亲身了解外界 花费多、旅途不便
注意:1.词数:80~120(不含已写好部分);
2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表述; 3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 4.参考词汇:眼界horizon (或view)。
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
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【答案】
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more,they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of
getting to know the outside world. However,others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion,it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework.
【解析】
这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作,它以表格的形式提出了论点(呆在家中的优点和缺点及外出旅游的优点和缺点)和论据,还以文字提示形式提出了话题(假期计划)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法),自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种,并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优、缺点,根据题目的特点,以三段式的形式来写作比较好。
根据内容,尽管讨论已经发生,但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论,没有特定的时间界限,因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述,这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。
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